Post by Orlando on Jul 31, 2011 14:21:10 GMT -5
Alright, here's the results you've all been waiting for. Sorry it took so long, Tal and I are both very busy people.... Anyway, without further a do, I present the Competition results!
JK, first I'll post our thoughts and reviews for the two fanfictions entered this week.
Nene: Both Tal and I found your fic to be very entertaining. It's a good twist on the old story of Gatomon that we all know and love. It was a good length, and was a very straight forward story. It did have a couple of grammer issues however, and switched from 3rd to 1st person narration after the first chapter. (I don't know if it was intentional or not) but it was noticable. But overall your story was good and entertaining.
Magna: Tal and I both found your stories to be very interesting and creative. You used a very original idea, and even gave a prelude to help the reader better envision your story. We found your style of writing to be very detailed, and descriptive. It was easy to picture everything written in your story, especially the second one. The description and casual language used in the second story was excellent. There was some grammer/ spelling mistakes however, and we found parts of the first story to be confusing at times. But the detail and creative storyline make up for that.
And now the actual results. Drumroll please!
*rollllllllllllllllll*
And this weeks winner is.....
Magna!the hitler and Jesus of all cake
We chose Magna's stories because they were very creative, and detailed. Despite being a tad confusing at times, both stories were very interesting and entertaining. So congrats Magna! ;D and better luck to everyone next week
JK, first I'll post our thoughts and reviews for the two fanfictions entered this week.
Nene: Both Tal and I found your fic to be very entertaining. It's a good twist on the old story of Gatomon that we all know and love. It was a good length, and was a very straight forward story. It did have a couple of grammer issues however, and switched from 3rd to 1st person narration after the first chapter. (I don't know if it was intentional or not) but it was noticable. But overall your story was good and entertaining.
Magna: Tal and I both found your stories to be very interesting and creative. You used a very original idea, and even gave a prelude to help the reader better envision your story. We found your style of writing to be very detailed, and descriptive. It was easy to picture everything written in your story, especially the second one. The description and casual language used in the second story was excellent. There was some grammer/ spelling mistakes however, and we found parts of the first story to be confusing at times. But the detail and creative storyline make up for that.
And now the actual results. Drumroll please!
*rollllllllllllllllll*
And this weeks winner is.....
Magna!
We chose Magna's stories because they were very creative, and detailed. Despite being a tad confusing at times, both stories were very interesting and entertaining. So congrats Magna! ;D and better luck to everyone next week
Awesome Sig by Tal