Post by Talmon on Aug 4, 2011 14:19:05 GMT -5
How about this: we review what Nene has written, 'cos that's what this is for, come on there is no reason to argue about this, fanfiction is one persons vision, if its not what you percieve write your own, I'm not digging at anyone, but let's just be happy.
On topic: It was too spaced, it made it seem lengthier than it is and put me off initially reading it, I had to really sit down and focus. The story has a good motion, and is fairly logical. The point of view makes it different and interesting.
On topic: It was too spaced, it made it seem lengthier than it is and put me off initially reading it, I had to really sit down and focus. The story has a good motion, and is fairly logical. The point of view makes it different and interesting.