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Post by Nene on Aug 11, 2011 5:13:47 GMT -5
Here's a poem I made as a tribute to certain villain..
Come here, little one Come here and be free Come to the light And join our fight
Death and destruction Are things we detest We'll fight against them And we'll do our best
Come here, little one, And avoid death When things go down In our bonds we have faith
*Brought to you by XHUA members*
Now, I think some of you know whom they're singing this to...
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Post by Talmon on Aug 11, 2011 5:18:42 GMT -5
Zenjiro? Anyways it is kinda good as a poem, it flowed fairly well and the rhyming scheme was okay, albeit it hickledy pickledy.
btw I think you should create a writing section and have fanfiction, poetry, roleplaying(with canon and oc's rp's(in general not just xros)) and other writing.
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Post by Nene on Aug 11, 2011 5:24:09 GMT -5
No, you are wrong. Zenjiro isn't a villain...
St. Galgomon knows to whom. Too bad she's offline.
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Post by Talmon on Aug 11, 2011 5:53:07 GMT -5
You know I was kidding, right?
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Post by Nene on Aug 11, 2011 6:09:12 GMT -5
Well, don't be kidding and tell me the real answer.
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Post by Talmon on Aug 11, 2011 6:11:43 GMT -5
Nah, it's cool :3
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Post by Nene on Aug 11, 2011 6:37:41 GMT -5
Please...tell me who is it about.
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Post by Talmon on Aug 11, 2011 6:38:03 GMT -5
Tero Bear?
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Post by Magnamon on Aug 11, 2011 6:47:30 GMT -5
it's about Yuu and this poem was kinda sucky admittedly I don't see you write poetry much but next time make sure it flows from verse to verse that's important
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Post by St.Galgomon on Aug 11, 2011 6:53:25 GMT -5
It was so beautiful yet so wrong. Evil Yuu FTW!
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Post by Nene on Aug 11, 2011 6:55:21 GMT -5
Wrong? What's so wrong about being good?
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Post by St.Galgomon on Aug 11, 2011 7:03:51 GMT -5
Because his evil smirk is cute.
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Post by Nene on Aug 11, 2011 7:08:27 GMT -5
Okay. ;D
Check the fanclub section...
Also, do you like the poem?
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