Revival! Birthday gift!

[Nene]

It was a depressing site. Everything was barren. Dark clouds covered the sky.

A young boy, approximately ten years old, was kneeling on dry grass, crying and pulling his hair. He uttered a single word.

"Damemon..." he muttered.

And that was all he said, before collapsing. Pain and guilt ravaged him from the inside.

Everyone he trusted had abandoned him. Everyone except Damemon and Xros Heart United Army members.

(Location:White castle)

"Are you ready?"

"Yes."

Taiki raised his Xros Loader, with Nene watching

"Revival!" Taiki commanded

Small shape appeared, growing more solid.

Finally, after an hour, he became fully solid.

It was Damemon.

"It's useful that we brought the statue of Goddess with us. Right, Nene?" Taiki said, smiling.

"A perfect gift for Yuu's birthday." was Nene's reply

[Magnamon]

*snickers* white Castle

[Talmon]

A good fanfiction overall Nene, it seems to be one of your best.

A small shape appeared, growing more solid.* Is correct.

"It's useful that we brought the statue of the Goddess* Is correct

apart from those two errors and the fact it is really short it is actually quite good

[Magnamon]

WHITE CASTLE! XDDDDD

[Talmon]

I don't get it? xD

[Magnamon]

[Talmon]

Hahah, oh yeah it's like macdonalds

[Magnamon]

it's mcdonald's if Mcdonald's had a 24 Hour Drive Thru and min burgers filled with so much fat that a fat guy had a reverse orgasm over it

[Nene]

Stop going humor. you just refuse to admit that you like it, Magna!

[Talmon]

urghhh, anyways lets reespect Nene and not spam up her fic.

[Nene]

Even Sommelier likes it.

[Magnamon]

well after I finished laughing at white Castle I actually read the fic: no I do not like it your premise is basically the same as your norm(lack of creativity in my opinion) it's too short for my tastes and your lack of detail prevents me from picturing it

[Talmon]

She presents more detail and description than usual but she kept it too short to really thicken it out imo magna.

[Nene]

Lack of detail? I gave descriptions! I guess your perfect fic is the one with no dialogue at all!

Even DS likes it, and he is bigger cynic than you when it comes to fics!

[Magnamon]

DS is a veritable douche who doesn't write though Nene and no have you not read my fics? you don't convey their thoughts well enough plus I can barely picture what is going on you're making it cut and dry and when dealing with people that's just not gonna happen