The Healer

[Nene]

You wanted a Xros Wars fic non-Yuu centered? Here it is.

Based off episode 48. Mostly revolving around Cutemon, Mervamon and Beelzebumon. Not a yaoi.

Beelzebumon was lying on the table. Mervamon and Cutemon were next to him. Cutemon was healing his wound, with Mervamon watching.

"How are you?" asked Mervamon.

"I'm fine. I feel like I'm going for a flight."

"But your wounds..."

"I'm taking you two with me. That way, Cutemon could continue healing and I could still fly."

"Okay." Mervamon agreed, reluctantly.

Beelzebumon scooped Mervamon and Cutemon up and took off.

While flying, they flew above Lilithmon.

By sheer luck, they somehow ran into Yuu. They decided not to let the chance slip by.

However, it did, as SkullKnightmon took Yuu away.

So Beelzebumon, Cutemon and Mervamon continued flying. During flight, they discovered some sort of hideous version of Lilithmon.

Beelzebumon, Cutemon and Mervamon were separated by Lilithmon, who boasted that she'll torture Beelzebumon till his death.

And then, Taiki, Kiriha and Nene arrived with their armies.

Beelzebumon, Mervamon and Cutemon volunteered to go distract Lilithmon, They, however had a tough time in doing so.

Finally, the gate opened. Shoutmon X7 attacked Lilithmon, enabling Beelzebumon, Cutemon and Mervamon to escape.

[Talmon]

It is quite good but far too short, thicken it out, add paragraphs and more description.

[Orlando]

You have a good storyline going here. But might I suggest adding more detail/ description? It'll definetely add a lot to the story and help the reader envision things better.

[Talmon]

Yup, as Orly said the plotline is good and because it's something you haven't done that shows that you have skill as a writer.