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Deaths
Aug 28, 2011 10:29:27 GMT -5
Post by Nene on Aug 28, 2011 10:29:27 GMT -5
This piece features two tragic deaths in episode 48. Enjoy!
Taiki was looking at dying Apollomon. Apollomon was looking back at Taiki.
"Taiki." Apollomon's voice rang in Taiki's head "Are my subjects safe from harm?"
"Yes. Kiriha and Nene freed them." was Taiki's muffled reply.
A lone tear fell down Taiki's cheek.
"I'll free you, Apollomon. I'll get you out from whereever dead Digimon go. You'll join us then. The world will know your true nature. I promise you that." Taiki said fiercely
"Arigatou, Taiki."Apollomon replied "And about Yuu...now you're free to go after him. Save him like you saved me."
"I will, Apollomon, I will." promised Taiki.
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Deaths
Aug 28, 2011 11:58:45 GMT -5
Post by Talmon on Aug 28, 2011 11:58:45 GMT -5
A good drabble, it was mildly enjoyable and it nearly provoked some emotion, good work.
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Deaths
Aug 28, 2011 12:11:49 GMT -5
Post by Nene on Aug 28, 2011 12:11:49 GMT -5
Nearly?
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Deaths
Aug 28, 2011 12:52:41 GMT -5
Post by Orlando on Aug 28, 2011 12:52:41 GMT -5
Yea Tal's right in a sense. It could use a tad more description and emotion. That would provoke more feeling for the reader.
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Deaths
Aug 28, 2011 12:55:14 GMT -5
Post by Talmon on Aug 28, 2011 12:55:14 GMT -5
I'm not an emotional person
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