Post by Talmon on Sept 13, 2011 13:47:11 GMT -5
A kingdom hearts fic. I guess it is gunna be several chapters since I need to build up to the idea I have. If there is incorrect parts of it please tell me, I adore kingdom hearts but finished 1, 2, 358/2 days and I think at least one other ages ago so I haven't played it in over a year.
He sat on the traverse town tram, its wooden framing made him feel comfortable. It was never easy being an orphan but there had been so many other great orphans, he just wished that he could be one of those, instead of someone sat at the end of a line on a tram that is supposed to go around the clock. He peered out, still no driver. He sighed and climbed out, as he expected his foot to hit the ground he felt himself falling through darkness instead of placing his foot onto the hard concrete slab that should have been there waiting. As he plummeted he shouted in fear, "What's happening!?" his voice called out to the darkness, in answer it morphed a spinning wooden table for him to land on. He did. With a thud.
"urhh" he groaned as he got up and the table stopped spinning, he went to move but he felt it tilt, how could it even be here, much less tilt when it was floating!? "Where am I?" he asked aloud, despite the fact he was alone.
"You are here" a mechanical voice replied.
"Where is here?" He retorted quickly.
"It is you" the voice replied. As it did a huge blue wave flew through the darkness and struck him, hard. He felt his body go weak and he dropped to the floor in a heap.
Yet again he felt himself groaning as he got back up but this time he felt sand in his ears, it washed over him like a wave in an ocean as he lay still. 'I may as well be buried alive...' he thought pessimistically as he lay there, moping and confused. As he did he felt a rough hand grab him and tug him out of the sand, setting him against a hard, rocky surface. "Open your eyes" the voice commanded respect and gave little in return. He quickly obliged and saw someone in front of him. They had grey, spiked shoulder length hair. Aged features, a grey cloak and seemingly dark blue pants and a shirt underneath. Then he looked at the eyes, a beautiful, young blue. They were wise, but forever young and mesmerising. On the back of the man was a weapon of sorts, he couldn't see what but it was diagonal from his left shoulder to below his right hip in it's holster. The man stared at him "Open." it was a simple command, one that he followed without hesistance. He was rewarded by a bottle of water, which was poured into his mouth for him to swallow then handed to him to drink on his own. As he finished it he looked at the man in admiration.
"Who are you?" he asked.
"Call me... Sora." the man said with a voice that was kinder and more caring than the original voice had been. He nodded to Sora with a smile then paused. Confused he looked at Sora
"Who am I?" he asked with a frown
"That is a question you should know the answer to" Sora said, sitting down next to him in the shade of the hill made of rock that he had his back against.
"I don't know" he replied, quickly panicking.
"I'll call you owh won for now" Sora said with a smile.
"Zero One?" he asked
"Pronounce it: Owh won. Now we best get going 01" Sora said as he got to his feet and brushed off the sand. 01 nodded and was helped up by Sora who turned and started to walk. 01 sighed and followed, timidly at first but eventually he just put all his effort into keeping up and not collapsing under the glare of the sun.
"Why am I here?" 01 asked as they had been walking for what seemed like forever.
"That, I cannot answer. However..." Sora began but he paused and moved his hand to the handle of his blade. That was when 01 noticed, it was a gigantic key, like one you would use to lock or open a door. It had two golden sides to the blue handle which Sora had already grasped. The rest of the 'key' was silver, it looked slightly worn but was mostly in amazing condition.
"What is that?" 01 asked.
Sora turned to him quickly "shhh" he hissed as he breathed in. He raised his keyblade and thunder burst from the sky and struck everywhere but Sora and 01 in a short radius around them. As it did the sand cleared and there were ghastly black creatures fully visible now.
"What are they!?" 01 screamed in shock, moving to cling to Sora who brushed him behind himself.
"Stay there!" Sora ordered as he moved. The black creatures were gangly and looked like little puppies with estranged limbs. They were entirely black except their piercing yellow eyes. Their coldness and anguish struck him with fear and sadness to the bone. They were not good. As they all leapt up to attack 01 closed his eyes in expectation of his death but as he opened them he saw Sora holstering the 'key' again quickly and turning around. "Questions?" he asked as he double checked they were in the clear.
"What were they!?" 01 exclaimed.
"Heartless, creatures devoid of hearts" Sora replied simply. He acted like the answer was obvious, and so were the creatures identities.
"What is that?" 01 asked, pointing to Sora's weapon.
"This?" he asked, touching the weapon he treasured almost as much as his friends.
01 nodded "Yeah"
"This is a keyblade. I am the keyblade's master" Sora explained. As he did a heartless appeared behind him and shot towards him, Sora hadn't realised. 01 panicked and pushed Sora to one side and leapt at the creature with his fist outstretched and his eyes tightly closed. As he reopened them he saw Sora on the floor and the heartless gone.
That's all for now since I have a lot of fics I need to crank out chapter one of before I can start updating again :/
He sat on the traverse town tram, its wooden framing made him feel comfortable. It was never easy being an orphan but there had been so many other great orphans, he just wished that he could be one of those, instead of someone sat at the end of a line on a tram that is supposed to go around the clock. He peered out, still no driver. He sighed and climbed out, as he expected his foot to hit the ground he felt himself falling through darkness instead of placing his foot onto the hard concrete slab that should have been there waiting. As he plummeted he shouted in fear, "What's happening!?" his voice called out to the darkness, in answer it morphed a spinning wooden table for him to land on. He did. With a thud.
"urhh" he groaned as he got up and the table stopped spinning, he went to move but he felt it tilt, how could it even be here, much less tilt when it was floating!? "Where am I?" he asked aloud, despite the fact he was alone.
"You are here" a mechanical voice replied.
"Where is here?" He retorted quickly.
"It is you" the voice replied. As it did a huge blue wave flew through the darkness and struck him, hard. He felt his body go weak and he dropped to the floor in a heap.
Yet again he felt himself groaning as he got back up but this time he felt sand in his ears, it washed over him like a wave in an ocean as he lay still. 'I may as well be buried alive...' he thought pessimistically as he lay there, moping and confused. As he did he felt a rough hand grab him and tug him out of the sand, setting him against a hard, rocky surface. "Open your eyes" the voice commanded respect and gave little in return. He quickly obliged and saw someone in front of him. They had grey, spiked shoulder length hair. Aged features, a grey cloak and seemingly dark blue pants and a shirt underneath. Then he looked at the eyes, a beautiful, young blue. They were wise, but forever young and mesmerising. On the back of the man was a weapon of sorts, he couldn't see what but it was diagonal from his left shoulder to below his right hip in it's holster. The man stared at him "Open." it was a simple command, one that he followed without hesistance. He was rewarded by a bottle of water, which was poured into his mouth for him to swallow then handed to him to drink on his own. As he finished it he looked at the man in admiration.
"Who are you?" he asked.
"Call me... Sora." the man said with a voice that was kinder and more caring than the original voice had been. He nodded to Sora with a smile then paused. Confused he looked at Sora
"Who am I?" he asked with a frown
"That is a question you should know the answer to" Sora said, sitting down next to him in the shade of the hill made of rock that he had his back against.
"I don't know" he replied, quickly panicking.
"I'll call you owh won for now" Sora said with a smile.
"Zero One?" he asked
"Pronounce it: Owh won. Now we best get going 01" Sora said as he got to his feet and brushed off the sand. 01 nodded and was helped up by Sora who turned and started to walk. 01 sighed and followed, timidly at first but eventually he just put all his effort into keeping up and not collapsing under the glare of the sun.
"Why am I here?" 01 asked as they had been walking for what seemed like forever.
"That, I cannot answer. However..." Sora began but he paused and moved his hand to the handle of his blade. That was when 01 noticed, it was a gigantic key, like one you would use to lock or open a door. It had two golden sides to the blue handle which Sora had already grasped. The rest of the 'key' was silver, it looked slightly worn but was mostly in amazing condition.
"What is that?" 01 asked.
Sora turned to him quickly "shhh" he hissed as he breathed in. He raised his keyblade and thunder burst from the sky and struck everywhere but Sora and 01 in a short radius around them. As it did the sand cleared and there were ghastly black creatures fully visible now.
"What are they!?" 01 screamed in shock, moving to cling to Sora who brushed him behind himself.
"Stay there!" Sora ordered as he moved. The black creatures were gangly and looked like little puppies with estranged limbs. They were entirely black except their piercing yellow eyes. Their coldness and anguish struck him with fear and sadness to the bone. They were not good. As they all leapt up to attack 01 closed his eyes in expectation of his death but as he opened them he saw Sora holstering the 'key' again quickly and turning around. "Questions?" he asked as he double checked they were in the clear.
"What were they!?" 01 exclaimed.
"Heartless, creatures devoid of hearts" Sora replied simply. He acted like the answer was obvious, and so were the creatures identities.
"What is that?" 01 asked, pointing to Sora's weapon.
"This?" he asked, touching the weapon he treasured almost as much as his friends.
01 nodded "Yeah"
"This is a keyblade. I am the keyblade's master" Sora explained. As he did a heartless appeared behind him and shot towards him, Sora hadn't realised. 01 panicked and pushed Sora to one side and leapt at the creature with his fist outstretched and his eyes tightly closed. As he reopened them he saw Sora on the floor and the heartless gone.
That's all for now since I have a lot of fics I need to crank out chapter one of before I can start updating again :/
Kh is probably my favorite thing ever besides music and cheese. This first chapter is pretty good, it definetely follows the myserious nature of any KH story. The only thing that seems a little out of place is Sora's personality. He's not as spunky like he is in the games, but then again he could be older or something. Anyways awesome fic though 
Awesome Sig by Tal